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Greetings Alda, Estela, Sandro and Fabio! It's been a long time since we've met. I'm glad you guys graduated. Alda informed me that you would make their lives in Rio, which is still newborn. She also informed me that you will form a research team. She told me about the project that you have in mind. You will reassemble the generation of the project in which we work. The one that made the pear, the fly and Jorge expand. The new project will be to start the alternative agriculture project. Well, what I have to say to you will not be very pleasant. You will not be able to find anything in that system that caused the atomic expansion in the fly, in the pear and in Jorge. Everything was the work of a device that I created in secret. In addition to working with you on the project for better efficacy for cancer treatment, I was helping an acquaintance of mine with a project to develop a weapon. He, who was a military man (I speak in the past, because he is missing), convinced me with a story that foreigners planned to occupy the Amazon Forest. We developed a device, whose function was atomic expansion, and I developed in the emitter of waves a receiver and a channel for a radiation to reach the target. But I did not count on the tragedy that would occur with Jorge. I'm telling you all this, with the risk that someone will find out and, why not say, that one of you will denounce me so you do not waste time trying to find in the generation that is there what caused the atomic expansion. Maybe you give up on the alternative agriculture project after what I'm telling you, but if you want to go ahead, I'll send you drawings of the device I told you in full detail. I am also concerned that people associate your project with what happened to Jorge, considering that you worked with me although it has been a few years ago. I hope you will forgive me. I was so down with everything that happened that I do not do any more research; I just complete the project for the improvement of cancer treatment, by honor and, why not say? Because of all of you, who have engaged very well in the project! Well ... all I have to wish for you is a great future! Bye! If you really want to get involved in the agriculture project, Alda has my e-mail.”

 

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Alda informed me that you would make their lives in Rio, which is still newborn.

Essa frase não faz muito sentido pra mim (embora eu não saiba o contexto).

She told me about the project that you have in mind. You will reassemble the generation of the project in which we work. (work ou worked? caso seja a segunda opção, considere utilizar "have worked").

I hope you will forgive me. (caso queira manter a frase original, considere incluir a palavra "eventually" no final. Ou então retire "will").

I was so down with everything that happened that I do not do any more research (sugiro trocar "down" por "upset", e talvez soe melhor "I don´t do any research anymore").

I just complete the project for the improvement of cancer treatment ("I´ve just completed", talvez?)

 

 

 

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